Coruscant Exile
05 December 2008 @ 11:43 pm
I'm not using this journal much, since I rarely write fan fiction and prefer to keep only two journals. However, since a few people have friended this one and not my primary journal, and it is where my previous writings have gone, I wanted to leave an update.

I wrote three novels for NaNoWriMo '08, all three original. I'm posting the best of the three onto my primary journal [info]eleventh_guard.

It's called Bounty Hunter Games and is about four guys - two ex-smugglers, an ex-worker for a legitimate shipping corporation, and a warrior knight - adventuring together while trying to find the Queen of Zeta Callasta. Her brother was murdered, making her the Queen, and she's missing. The Duke, the next in line for the throne until her nephew turns twenty, has launched a massive search for her, with a bounty of 2 million credits for her capture or death.

There is no sex (it's not original slash fiction); it's general sci-fi. If you liked The Last Guardian you'll probably like this one; it has some similarities, though overall the plot and characters are quite different.

A full warning-disclaimer would reveal a spoiler, so here's the general one: the novel has some violence, blood/gore, profane language, and mature themes, and is intended for readers 16 and up.

Click here for it: http://eleventh-guard.livejournal.com/tag/bounty+hunter+games

It's public, so you don't have to friend the journal, but you're welcome to do so. And as always I would love to hear your comments, and I'll do my best to reply back.
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 04:48 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters, or here for Chapter One.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-NINE RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 29 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 04:41 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-EIGHT RATING: R (violence, subject matter, character death)

Chapter 28 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 04:26 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-SEVEN RATING: R (violence, subject matter, character death)

Chapter 27 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 04:09 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-SIX RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 26 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 03:57 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-FIVE RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 25 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 03:44 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-FOUR RATING: PG (subject matter)

Chapter 24 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 03:28 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE RATING: PG-13 (subject matter, sexual content)

Chapter 23 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 03:16 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO RATING: PG (subject matter)

Chapter 22 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 03:04 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY-ONE RATING: PG (subject matter)

Chapter 21 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 02:34 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWENTY RATING: PG-13 (violence, subject matter)

Chapter 20 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 02:22 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER NINETEEN RATING: PG (subject matter)

Chapter 19 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 12:32 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER EIGHTEEN RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 18 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 12:16 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER SEVENTEEN RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 17 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 12:00 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER SIXTEEN RATING: R (violence, subject matter)

Chapter 16 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 11:17 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post; use the tlg-original-fiction tag to see all chapters.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER FIFTEEN RATING: R (subject matter, rape)

Chapter 15 )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 02:04 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER FOURTEEN RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter 14 )

Click on the tlg-original-fiction tag for other chapters.
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 01:41 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER THIRTEEN RATING: R (subject matter, sexual content, dubious-consent)
NOTES: 2 weeks after Chapter 12.

Chapter 13 )

Check out the tlg-original-fiction tag for all posted chapters.
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 01:23 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWELVE RATING: R (subject matter, violence, character death)
NOTES: Takes place three weeks after Chapter 11.

Chapter Twelve )

(Click the tlg-original-fiction tag to get all the posted chapters.)
 
 
Coruscant Exile
05 December 2007 @ 01:16 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER ELEVEN RATING: R (subject matter, violence)
NOTE: This chapter is short. It's mainly to bridge 10 to 12; in the original draft, 11 had been skipped, and now it's too long to tack on to another chapter, but short to make its own.

Chapter Eleven )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
04 December 2007 @ 11:27 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TEN RATING: R (subject matter, violence, character death)
NOTES: Takes place roughly 1 year after Chapters 8-9.

Chapter Ten )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
04 December 2007 @ 11:13 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER NINE RATING: NC-17 (sexual content, subject matter)

Chapter Nine )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
01 December 2007 @ 12:43 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER EIGHT RATING: R (subject matter, nudity, sexual content)
NOTE: This takes place 8 years after Chapters 2-7. Chapter 9 is not finished (although most subsequent chapters are), so it will be posted when complete - sometime between Sunday afternoon and Tuesday night.

Chapter 8 )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
01 December 2007 @ 12:32 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER SEVEN RATING: PG-13 (mature content)
NOTE: Lizveta has more and better historical-war info than Sarkilan did, but as she is unaware of the fact that Hedral City even exists, she's still working with an incomplete picture.

Chapter Seven )

Previous Chapter Links )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
29 November 2007 @ 11:22 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER SIX RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)

Chapter Six )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
28 November 2007 @ 05:59 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER FIVE RATING: R (violence)

Chapter Five )

Links to previous chapters )
 
 
Coruscant Exile
28 November 2007 @ 05:08 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER FOUR RATING: R (subject matter, death, character injury and descriptions of same)
NOTE: Small correction: the story began in 7833, not 7828 (both years from the founding of Hedral City, and corresponding to the middle of the 29500s in the Common Era). This was a trivial booboo from my notes; it was Sarkilan, not Aristin, who was born at the beginning of 7828. The actual year number doesn't affect anything.

Chapter Four )

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
 
 
Current Mood: mischievous
 
 
Coruscant Exile
27 November 2007 @ 02:31 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting as [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER THREE RATING: PG-13 (subject matter)
NOTE: This chapter is mostly from Sarkilan's perspective. Some of the information she has regarding history is erroneous, but she doesn't know that.

Chapter 3 )

Chapter One
Chapter Two
 
 
Coruscant Exile
25 November 2007 @ 06:38 pm
TITLE: The Last Guardian
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity face a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary in the Chapter One post linked at the bottom.
STORY RATING: NC-17
CHAPTER TWO RATING: PG-13 (violence, subject matter)

Chapter Two )

Link to Chapter One and Story Notes
 
 
Coruscant Exile
24 November 2007 @ 11:41 am
TITLE: The Last Guardian
AUTHOR: [info]eleventh_guard posting under [info]coruscant_exile
FANDOM: Original fiction
SUMMARY: Twenty thousand years in the future, the remnants of humanity faced a hard choice: evolution and revolution, or extinction. Several millennia later, society has deeply changed and long-kept secrets threaten to bring the species to the brink of death once more. Full summary under cut.
GENRE: Science fiction, mostly... and a little of everything else
LABELS: Violence, light D/s, homosexuality (only gay males depicted in detail; possible ambiguous lesbian subtext), heterosexual relationships mentioned briefly, character death, more character death, still more character death, non-con, incest (two brothers), male pregnancy, dystopian society, eugenics, general mature subject matter.
RATING: NC-17 (there's not a LOT of sex, but enough detail in one section to qualify for the rating, and a lot of the rest of the story borders on R for adult situations and/or violence anyway)
CHAPTER ONE RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: See notes

Notes and full summary )


Chapter One )